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Light my path
Contributed by
kolbrun
on
Monday, 27th January 2003 @ 09:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Gradient darkness
distant, glistening journey
twinkle for me
Never-ending beacon
deer in the headlights
frozen anchor I see
Futile escapism
tight grip dispels madness
guide my sanity
Boggle resistant
shine love´s pure adoration
hope is the key.
Copyright ©
kolbrun
... [
2003-01-27 21:00:00]
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Re: Light my path
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 28th January 2003 @ 03:01:48 AM AEST
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| beautiful and touching.. your poetry is lovely.. |
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Re: Light my path
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by iso on
Wednesday, 29th January 2003 @ 02:23:54 AM AEST
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| The short descriptions work very well for the message. |
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Re: Light my path
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by wolfflow on
Sunday, 2nd February 2003 @ 07:56:34 AM AEST
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| total admiration for this poem, bedazzled by it i am, the style is just sublime, and yes, hold on to hope, those fantasies would wreck your head... |
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Re: Light my path
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by Ronald on
Sunday, 2nd February 2003 @ 10:00:47 PM AEST
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| I like this poem a lot! Great poem! |
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