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DEADMAN'S DEPRESSION
Contributed by
lonelywolf04
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Monday, 6th February 2006 @ 12:53:34 AM in AEST
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Why must I die,
Never to know why,
A single tear,
I have not shed in more than a year,
My halo becoming a noose,
Never getting any less loose,
Was never able to say good-bye,
And yet I never cry,
So I ask why must we die,
Never to say good-bye.
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2006-02-06 00:53:34]
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Re: DEADMAN'S DEPRESSION
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Monday, 6th February 2006 @ 01:00:32 AM AEST
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One can say so much in so little words. Depression sadly is very common these days. I am severe suffer myself, but with the right help one can get their life back on track.
Chin up and may u have much happier days ahead.
*warm heartfelt hugs*
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Re: DEADMAN'S DEPRESSION
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by darkstarsk8er1989 on
Monday, 6th February 2006 @ 09:42:25 AM AEST
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This is a very good poem on the subject of depression. I've tried to put it into words but can't. I really like how you did and with such short and to the point style. I really like it.
~Dark~ |
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