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Malady of Acrimony
Contributed by
weepingprophet
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Monday, 6th February 2006 @ 12:40:52 AM in AEST
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god, i wish i could rip you out of life
you're the sickness in my veins
you're the regrettable memory
that leaves a permenant stain
the days in your arms so shallow
a wave good-bye beating upon the shore
but distant is the swallow
that begs unjustified, no more
love is a time bomb
ready to go off in my hand
i'd throw it right back at you
give you my list of demands
but you're dead
you're dull
and sullen
a virus only lives through its host
so here's the farewell toast
i can't love you
suck the plague from this face
you're a disgrace
permenant stain of regret
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weepingprophet
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2006-02-06 00:40:52]
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Re: Malady of Acrimony
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by sammydid on
Monday, 6th February 2006 @ 06:01:54 PM AEST
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i like the comparison of love to a time bomb.
nice write. :) |
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Re: Malady of Acrimony
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by In_a_while on
Tuesday, 7th February 2006 @ 03:21:44 PM AEST
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very heavy writing. It's good to see that your pieces
are as strong as ever; i've not read or written on the
site for awhile. I've always admired the sheer
brutality with which you write...it's something
honesty is openly privy to. These lines are
my absolute favourite:
"a virus only lives through its host
so here's the farewell toast
I can't love you
suck the plague from this face
you're a disgrace"
I hope to read more and wish you the best
in your future writes.
dw |
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