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The Wait of Eternity
Contributed by
silentpwn
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Sunday, 5th February 2006 @ 06:33:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Let it be known to all, The Wait of Eternity. The significance of these words shall be stilled as the truth be spoken. There for devouring all I have ever believed. Tears are what make up my lullaby like the undertow of dreams. With eyes like murder, the glances partially echo through each leaf. Each tree, every wave, everyone… All know the power that will be cast upon thee once truth has it’s vengeance. Oh, this elysian retribution feels like sin. But as I had once believed, giving into temptation hurts angelical indeed.
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Re: The Wait of Eternity
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by Butterflygirl40 on
Monday, 6th February 2006 @ 05:34:26 PM AEST
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I thought this was a good poem even tho it was short .. I have alot of poems on here also if you would like to go read them...
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Re: The Wait of Eternity
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by JGB on
Saturday, 8th April 2006 @ 02:50:22 AM AEST
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I like it, and I understand
Yet, I had to read it a few times because it seems to be constrained to tightly together.
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