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Time
Contributed by
moses
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Sunday, 5th February 2006 @ 11:13:12 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I wish time was mine to hold.
Its true what I've been told,
that time flies by in the blink of an eye,
to me it's worth more than gold.
I just strive to be alive
and at peace with myself.
What I feel and I say is heartfelt.
Perfect is something I can't be,
but it's what I always wanted to see.
The man in the mirror is still me
and what I want isn't getting any nearer.
Coming to grips with my insecurities and what I fear.
I feel like I lose more of the sadness with every tear.
Sometime I try too hard
and too often let down my guard.
I feel that this depression has gone too far.
Through what has come,
the more you become what you are.
I need a plan to free me,
from this life that has become so bland.
Everyday is the same damn routine,
but I don't want to wipe the slate clean.
The troubles have made me wiser,
I've been near the bottom,
from here I can only get higher.
Copyright ©
moses
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2006-02-05 11:13:12]
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Re: Time
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by deadheadpoet on
Sunday, 5th February 2006 @ 09:43:23 PM AEST
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| Great expression in this write. Wonderful. Thank you for sharing. Peace, Laura |
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Re: Time
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Monday, 6th February 2006 @ 01:09:24 AM AEST
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The troubles have made me wiser,
I've been near the bottom,
from here I can only get higher.
And higher u shall get my friend. You are very talented and gifted. May ur pen always flow fluently with such poetic verses. You have alot of potential and I can see u getting far with ur writing. Keep the faith my friend. All the best to ya.
*warm hugs*
~sue~ |
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