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my song
Contributed by
outlaw_mutiny
on
Sunday, 5th February 2006 @ 12:05:36 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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when you speak i hear the sweetest sound
ike mystic music from the underground
it takes me away far away from here
the melody fows as the warm wind blows
whiping away my every tear
i can't stand the silence when your not around
your's is the sweetest song i've ever found
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outlaw_mutiny
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2006-02-05 00:05:36] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: my song
(User Rating: 1 ) by trev_clev on
Sunday, 5th February 2006 @ 02:09:52 AM AEST (User
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i like this one. It flows well and is a good read. |
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Re: my song
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Sunday, 5th February 2006 @ 10:45:01 AM AEST (User
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Sweet portayal of love. A pleasure to read. Thanks.....Mike |
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