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Misplaced
Contributed by
sicknivesevered
on
Saturday, 4th February 2006 @ 10:45:49 PM in AEST
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rupturing
dreaming wasted
vomiting in this black hole
torn across
empty spaces
godless we give extol
we live here
where nothingness blooms abundant
conceived here
stagnation has become redundant
blue slid across my face
i let it go, i let it go
shifting what was misplaced
silent, life grows
expelling
bleeding painless
naked we circle the drain
faces shift
counting ruin
i drown in the same
to die here
where consciousness smears together
my worst fear
to never sever from this tether
blue slid across my face
i let it go, i let it go
shifting what was misplaced
silent, life grows
the stars fade
my mother laughs
i can't paint my way out of this shell
the stars fade away
laughing
eclipsing
the stars fade
my mother laughs
i can't paint my way out of this shell
blue slid across my face
i let it go, i let it go
shifting what was misplaced
silent, life grows
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Re: Misplaced
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by bobotheclown on
Sunday, 5th February 2006 @ 07:07:16 PM AEST
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Hmm this was interesting I'm not sure if the
last line, "silent, life grows". was meant to
convey hope and happiness or not. A line that
sticks out to me for some reason is, "I can't
paint my way out of this shell". I don't know if
that is meant to be taken literally or not like
for instance I write to release emotions so do
you paint to release emotions? In any case a
good poem/song.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: Misplaced
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by Strawberry on
Friday, 10th February 2006 @ 06:59:06 PM AEST
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| This is really really good. You are a way better songwriter than I am. Sammi Jo |
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Re: Misplaced
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Friday, 23rd March 2007 @ 08:49:53 AM AEST
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This was good. I liked the repition of those stanza's. This was really well written and I liked this alot.
Take care
Christina |
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