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Token.
Contributed by
butterflygirl40
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Saturday, 4th February 2006 @ 10:12:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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There was this guy named brain who took action.
And he walked up to the airman and got bitten by the airmans dog.
Then brain turn around and beat the dog and began getting he's mail.
Brain broke he's leg and when he got he's leg fixed he brighten up again.
Then brain went out to the ocean to pet a dolpin because he loved dolphins.
As time went on it got darken and deepen and he felt like fallen into the demon and kept he's destin.
Then brain was driven into the demon and he's engine felled .
He felt like he had done this before and like a dozen of times and he was eaten by the demon.
And brain was frozen when this happen to him.
When all of this happen to brain he was given a second chance and so happen that heaven opened up .
And it was a lesson learned by brain to never trust the airman because he was the demon and none of this would have happen to brain .
SO WHEN ALL OF THIS CAME TO A END ,,, BRAIN WAS SO HAPPY TO SEE HEAVEN....
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Re: Token.
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Saturday, 4th February 2006 @ 10:43:48 PM AEST (User
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Sweet sweet Brain, I am so happy for him and his second chance. For all the other Brains, they too can learn the same lesson, to place our trust in Him. He will open up the heavens, the demons will not get that second chance. We do not need to beat the dog, God will take care of the dog. I love the part where Brain went to the ocean and petted him, because he loved dolphins, shows he was not an evil person at all. Raquel Leah |
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Re: Token.
(User Rating: 1 ) by Butterflygirl40 on
Saturday, 4th February 2006 @ 10:44:14 PM AEST (User
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I dont see nothing wrong with this poem that i wrote ... someone could at least comment me are vote!!!! ..... plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz. let me know what you think of this poem because lately i cant think of nothing to write about.^_^ |
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