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Living Heck
Contributed by
Kunoichi
on
Saturday, 4th February 2006 @ 12:46:48 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Bad days pile up,
Leaving me in the dust.
Then I feel like I don't belong,
Like a car left to rust.
I don't want to stay,
But no one will let me go.
My life is sped up,
But the days are so slow.
My heart is breaking,
You won't see me tomorrow.
My head is aching,
You'll be filled with sorrow.
The light is gone,
The darkness approaches.
My mind is spinning,
As the darkness encroaches.
Why can't I win?
I'm losing so bad.
I'm away with my sin,
But please don't be sad.
Copyright ©
Kunoichi
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2006-02-04 00:46:48]
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Re: Living Heck
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by hoist1atca on
Saturday, 4th February 2006 @ 01:10:52 AM AEST
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This is good-
It explains a lot of my 45 years gone by-
Try this to cure your block--
Write with your heart and not your head-
Thoughts often get jumbled and change but feelings always remain -
What I mean is that if you love someone that fact will never die-only the way you think about that person will change...
Joe |
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Re: Living Heck
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 18th March 2007 @ 01:50:38 PM AEST
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| I really know how you feel. I want to rid myself from this world but i have the same probem: no on wan ts to let me go though deep down I know they really don't give a rats butt about us. This is a seriously great poem. I hope you continue to write!!! |
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