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Valentine of a Lonely Heart
Contributed by
LostInLife
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Saturday, 4th February 2006 @ 12:14:13 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Everytime I see the red rose
That you gave to me
I see you standing there
Bringing back the memories
From that horrible day of love
Valentines Day
The day you shot me in the heart
I was shattered into pieces
My gift from you
Was two goodbye poems
When my eyes met with the paper
My feelings were torn apart into pieces
Falling all over the floor
Splattered around like the blood that you shed
Everytime I fall
You get up
Getting stronger and stronger
As I get weaker and weaker
Finally letting go
Of the love
That I once had for you
Copyright ©
LostInLife
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2006-02-04 00:14:13]
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Re: Valentine of a Lonely Heart
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 4th February 2006 @ 12:33:54 AM AEST
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I see so much gut wretching tragedy in this poem. Though this was very simplistic in the form of tragedy simplicity is the most expressive form. My heart and prayers are with you and I wish you a much happier, less tragic, and romantic valentine's day this year.
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Re: Valentine of a Lonely Heart
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by Vampirequeen on
Saturday, 4th February 2006 @ 01:10:21 AM AEST
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| wow very deep |
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