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NO NEED FOR HEAVEN
Contributed by
emystar
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Friday, 3rd February 2006 @ 06:56:45 AM in AEST
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I'm In Heaven |
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When I'm
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SultryRose's Signatures
We all got our ways,sometimes
seemingly endless days.
We all trip here-n-there
found my peice of heaven here.
My T., he say, "if everybody
was perfect, They'ed
be no need for heaven."
Humn, now think upon that.
Scratchin my head, no dout,
'bout that.
So we can make our own
heaven or hell, god's song.
Forgive to find forgiveness
soon you'll find heavenly bliss.
Perfect, heck that ain't me.
Mess up many times, see?
So heaven's in our imortal souls.
Love , peace, harmony our goal.
Copyright ©
emystar
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2006-02-03 06:56:45]
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Re: NO NEED FOR HEAVEN
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by T-Rod on
Friday, 3rd February 2006 @ 08:53:38 AM AEST
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| I thought that it was wondreful to read |
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Re: NO NEED FOR HEAVEN
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by enigma on
Friday, 3rd February 2006 @ 10:58:41 AM AEST
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...nicely expressed...I like to think I'm perfectly imperfect...
...how do you do those pictures...that's neat...
ron...enigma |
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Re: NO NEED FOR HEAVEN
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Friday, 3rd February 2006 @ 04:21:48 PM AEST
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A very well penned and expressed piece of poetry. The picture is fantastic too.
A delightful pleasure as always sweet lady Emy. You rock!
*love n hugs*
~sue~ |
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Re: NO NEED FOR HEAVEN
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 3rd February 2006 @ 09:11:35 PM AEST
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Awww Grrlfriend...I wouldn't mind meeting 'him'..lol
Lovely bit of writing too....
Hugs
Your friend always,
Jenni |
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Re: NO NEED FOR HEAVEN
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by MorningDove on
Friday, 3rd February 2006 @ 09:46:53 PM AEST
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What a delightful piece of work. We humans certainly are not perfect and never will be, but we can try to live by His rules and bring peace, love and harmony to those around us we love. You are a great writer my dear sweet friend.
Love,
Rita |
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Re: NO NEED FOR HEAVEN
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 6th February 2006 @ 07:50:59 PM AEST
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"Baby you're all that I want.
As I'm lying here in the dark
I find it hard to believe, we're in heaven"
The poem with the music almost brought tears to my eyes. To be in love, how I miss it. Especially love's beginning. Damn you've got me emotional. There is a little demon in my head shooting spit balls at you. The rest of me however thanks you. The spirituality combined with love is just simply perfect. I find the mixture to create some of the most beautiful poetry. Outstanding!
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