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Remember
Contributed by
Wonderfully-Disturbed
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Friday, 3rd February 2006 @ 01:33:34 AM in AEST
Topic:
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I know how much you hated me
But I still thought highly of you
And now you're days are numbered
You have weeks left, but few...
I can pretend I don`t care
That you're life is coming to an end
Even though you broke my heart
It`s had the time it needs to mend...
I will never forget you
The boy from my wildest dreams
But this is not love I feel
Nothing is what it seems
I want to know you'll be happy
And safe on this new track
And when the wind brushes past my ear
It will whisper the name...Zac
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Re: Remember
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 3rd February 2006 @ 04:16:45 AM AEST
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Oh that's sad. I'm missing somebody and have no idea how they are too.
That first paragraph really says a lot, especially about forgiveness and such. Making me all misty-eyed and everything. Your rhyme seems perfect.
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Re: Remember
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by Nightingale on
Friday, 3rd February 2006 @ 06:12:26 AM AEST
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There's only one step between love and hatred. Hope Zac knows about your feelings..
God bless |
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