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Free will of the Mind
Contributed by
brew
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Thursday, 2nd February 2006 @ 09:53:18 PM in AEST
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A soft touch
A luring touch
Something that has been and will be again
Heaven...Yet :can not be explained
To feel what was there but no explanation beyond compare
Total solitare
No commitment
All the freeness and the flow
Just to close eyes and know
No fright
No complelling feels
Just wind
Taking you to the high
Simpleness ...Life
This is what has been there for all
Just never taking into to prosepective
It has always been taken for granted
Copyright ©
brew
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2006-02-02 21:53:18]
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Re: Free will of the Mind
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 2nd February 2006 @ 10:29:39 PM AEST
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| This made me feel strangely calm and relaxed. That's a very good thing. This is a wonderful poem. |
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Re: Free will of the Mind
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by MorningDove on
Friday, 3rd February 2006 @ 09:50:08 PM AEST
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Music is truly an enlightening muse. It can take you beyond realms ever experienced. It flows through us like sweet red wind and leave a euphoric feeling. Beautiful write, my child.
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Re: Free will of the Mind
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by Man_On_High on
Saturday, 4th February 2006 @ 11:06:43 PM AEST
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Sounds like Heaven to me Brew : )
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Re: Free will of the Mind
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 9th February 2006 @ 07:36:56 AM AEST
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I love it when you get the right piece, of music or the right frame of mind, or even a combination of the two and it can just take you far far away from everything.
It's almost like you're above the world not judging anyone or anything. Just observing.
Great poem written with a lot of depth.
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Re: Free will of the Mind
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by Man_On_High on
Thursday, 23rd February 2006 @ 12:58:55 AM AEST
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I would agree with both marissa and rita-
Calm and relaxed as I read..and music is a wonderful muse..
But when I read the final stanza..I felt a bitterness
"This is what has been there for all
Just never taking into to prosepective
It has always been taken for granted"
as in: you've peace many a day..
but always ,there is something coming back to
haunt you..
(my take)
There for you Dayna..platonically if you like..
Concerned Friend...
Billy
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Re: Free will of the Mind
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by wizard on
Thursday, 13th April 2006 @ 10:06:12 PM AEST
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i enjoyed this greatly...
"Heaven...Yet :can not be explained"
so true....reading this makes me realize that there are so many things that will never be explained!
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