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20 years from now...I'll still be the same
Contributed by
poetic_influence
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Thursday, 2nd February 2006 @ 06:33:13 PM in AEST
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Take me as I am
For I...Will never change
I dont give a damn
If you cannot handle that than I am out of your range
I say what I want
Whenever I feel
Very nonchalant
Always so very real
If you dont like the image I give out
Then turn around and face the door
Your opinions I can do without
See...
I believe that God lets us have free will
No "Spirit Guides" will guide us
Our destiny's we have fufilled
And this I have many times discussed
We talk of God and Jesus like they came from a mystical world
And I pity you people for that
Thats what separates the men and women from the boys and girls
All you do is twist the facts
So if you hate me for being a born again christian
Then you take your decision straight tot he bank
But when It comes to judgement day you will be wishing
That your "open minded" head wasn't so damn blank
I could have helped you
But you decided to urn your cheek
Now all that I can tell you
Is that you should have listened to me
Should have noticed the truth once spoken
Now dont blame me
That your soul was never awoken
Goodnight to you
Enjoy your life of the five senses
I will pray for you
For now, and for future and past tences
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Re: 20 years from now...I'll still be the same
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by OzChick on
Friday, 3rd February 2006 @ 01:01:29 AM AEST
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| Well, well, well. Shame about the spelling errors. And yes, we turned the other cheek, just like Jesus taught us to and you slapped it. It's also a shame you do not seem to have enough respect for your new found faith to use capitol letters like it deserves. Still, as poems go, not too bad. You spoke your mind, how ever closed and small it may be. |
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Re: 20 years from now...I'll still be the same
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by deadheadpoet on
Friday, 3rd February 2006 @ 02:13:07 AM AEST
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| Well, decided to leave a comment because I voted on the poem. I don't like it when people score you low then won't tell you why. You have a lot of misspelled words...or typos as you call it. It sort of takes away the persona of you being highly intelligent and better than others. You seem to be stroking yourself here in an unbecoming way. Peace, Laura |
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