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Tear Soaked Sheets
Contributed by
worldsenigma
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Thursday, 2nd February 2006 @ 06:20:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
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As these tears hit the page
I'm dismayed
I've allowed myself to fall
into what they call...
love
As more tears hit the page
they soak into the sheet
absorbing all that they were
like my life when im around her
Doing things I wouldn't do
saying things I've never thought
Not to impress
but to express
the way life's changed since then
Since this heaven on earth stepped into my life
Memories of no time of peace
left in the past
all behind me
You, my future
giving me reason to believe
things will get better
As last tears hit the page
and my eyes begin to dry
Deny such tears of regret
those of joy begin to cry
Copyright ©
worldsenigma
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2006-02-02 18:20:54]
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Re: Tear Soaked Sheets
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by Jackee_line on
Thursday, 2nd February 2006 @ 06:47:00 PM AEST
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| very nice |
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Re: Tear Soaked Sheets
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by angrymargarita on
Thursday, 2nd February 2006 @ 07:14:40 PM AEST
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| I really like it engima I think you should tell the person how you feel about them. But keep writing. Its good. It seems natural. |
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Re: Tear Soaked Sheets
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Thursday, 2nd February 2006 @ 07:32:51 PM AEST
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A very well expressed and penned piece of poetry filled with emotions from ones heart. You've done a fine job with this write. Keep up the great work.
*warm hugs*
~sue~ |
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Re: Tear Soaked Sheets
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by brew on
Thursday, 2nd February 2006 @ 09:57:43 PM AEST
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Expression of all that is wanted, felt and given.
The "whole" , yes which is that 4 letter word... LOVE.......Tell the one who holds your key. Such beauty here. Liked the straight to the point touch
Brew~ |
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Re: Tear Soaked Sheets
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by Artemis03 on
Monday, 6th February 2006 @ 09:37:45 PM AEST
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| I think.... im IN LOVE with this poem. I feel it.. i think i know..somewhat exactly what it means. You use ya words so beautifully...your poetry is amazing....you r Mista Amazing |
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