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morning song
Contributed by
lostrelic
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Thursday, 2nd February 2006 @ 06:03:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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im starting to dig my shallow grave i have my morning song
wanting to escape the day i feel there is something wrong
unable to smile as the devil holds me back
losing my mind i am starting to crack
the sun may shine but when your down your down
trying to smile but only end with a frown
i look at my grave as sad as i am
i dont think i can die i just dont want to be like them
alone i sing my morning song
i wish i had someone to sing along
but its my death i choose how i please
i dont care if i burried in the weeds
you may say goodbye and wish me all the best
but i dont care you act like the rest
i will lie here today mabey tommorow will be changed
dont worry about me im a little deranged
all i want to do is die
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Re: morning song
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 2nd February 2006 @ 06:15:12 PM AEST
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| Then we would all miss your poetry. Think about it....Mike |
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Re: morning song
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Thursday, 2nd February 2006 @ 07:41:32 PM AEST
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You know what I like about ur writes Reagan, they're always different. One is never disappointed when they read ur great writes.
Although this is a sad and emotional write it's penned with great detail. Well done and keep up the great work.
*warm hugs*
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Re: morning song
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by brew on
Thursday, 2nd February 2006 @ 10:02:42 PM AEST
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always a free flowing write of yours. Your write of heart, and feelings...............whether it be of yours, or someone eles'..........Always a pleasure to read your writes, they are inspiring in ALL ways.
Brew~ |
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