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I. Hate. This.
Contributed by
trini
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Thursday, 2nd February 2006 @ 04:41:38 PM in AEST
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hbadday
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I hate this.
Delete it,
Every poem I have ever written means nothing.
Art can’t save me.
Words posted for people to take pity on,
Or to compliment.
Either concludes to one thing,
I am still here.
Alone.
Sitting in front of my computer.
Waiting for something.
Closure.
Where have you gone?
Words on a page,
Randomly placed,
There is no sense in them.
But when has that ever made a difference?
Delete this.
I hate everything.
Copyright ©
trini
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2006-02-02 16:41:38]
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Re: I. Hate. This.
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by lostrelic on
Thursday, 2nd February 2006 @ 05:21:21 PM AEST
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| well dont feel all that bad if no one comments this place in very cliche so i think its a good poem ty for posting it |
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Re: I. Hate. This.
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 2nd February 2006 @ 06:18:38 PM AEST
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| But you posted it anyway so you will have to put up with the words of pity or compliment. Deep inside you want to here what we all think of your writing. I myself, would like to see more........Mike |
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Re: I. Hate. This.
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by Lin54 on
Thursday, 2nd February 2006 @ 06:37:32 PM AEST
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Maybe it won't help--but there are days we all feel like we ourselves want to be "deleted"
Your feelings have come through very well--I agree--you need to write and share!
Lin54 |
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Re: I. Hate. This.
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by all_that_i_can_be on
Wednesday, 8th February 2006 @ 06:16:35 PM AEST
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anything that you write and truly mean will never be worthless.
and dont let anyone ever tell you otherwise. |
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