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sorry imnot perfect
Contributed by
hopefades
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Thursday, 2nd February 2006 @ 02:43:24 PM in AEST
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i sit and stair into your eyes
your crying and i dont know why
if you found out about things i lied about
then i could understand why you cry
but the thing is .. you dont
... you dont know who i am
you tell me i can go out a do something
but you dont know what i do
you cry even when im being the fake lil girl
that i always thought you wanted in your life
i dont even remember the last time i told you the truth
and even though you never find out what i really do
you still look into my eyes and and i see you crying
why why are you crying mom
im trying to be the daughter you would actually want in your life
but its not working
you still arent happy with me
why cant i just be the daughter you want
im living a lie
and i thought that it would finally make you happy
but all it does is make you cry and make me feel more guilty
and the only thing i can think about to make me feel better about being myself
is something that you dont even know about
theres this guy .. he makes me smile at my low points mom
he is perfect
but you wouldnt know that
because i cant tell you about him
or you would leave me out in the cold
i want to tell you about my life .. but i cant
because you even cry when im trying to be the fake perfect daughter i thought you wanted
so im sry mom im sry i make you cry
but no one is perfect
and i try to be
so im sry that your not happy with me
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Re: sorry imnot perfect
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by boobiepeach on
Thursday, 2nd February 2006 @ 03:05:28 PM AEST
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great write. everyone feels this way i think. nothing will ever be good enough for some. if your proud of yourself she wont matter.
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Re: sorry imnot perfect
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by enigma on
Thursday, 2nd February 2006 @ 04:33:44 PM AEST
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...a wonderfully honest write...such a tearing of precious fabric...oh, so many very good intentioned people told me things that just ran off my back...but many years later, the words that needed to came back to me and I was then able to recognize the nugget of Truth...my wife and I have come to the conclusion that mankind has this perfect and imperfect thing mixed up...you are perfect...it is this false-perfection that is imperfect...you are perfect just the way you are...like a well made car, when you are driving along and nothing is malfunctioning, that's perfectly good...when a red light flashes on the dashboard, that's perfectly good, too...that's how it was made to perform...same with us, we just need to read our dashboard lights a little more effectively...they give us important information about ourselves...things that need our attention...snipping the wires or covering the light up won't help the malfunction...said too much already...she Loves you as much as you Love her...it is usually the Self-Love that is the problem...
...gonna go...
...blessings on the both of you,
ron...enigma |
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Re: sorry imnot perfect
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by Nightingale on
Friday, 3rd February 2006 @ 01:08:51 AM AEST
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| Good write. Nobody is perfect.. We try hard to please our parents but they don't seem to see it. |
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