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suck money from me
Contributed by
lostrelic
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Thursday, 2nd February 2006 @ 01:59:56 PM in AEST
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questions like rhymes a never ending reply
always on my tongue but cant find answers to supply
like us we wander lost on our path
trying to hide from societys corporate wrath
walking in fallen dreams of a ruined out city
watching the rodents with out any pity
billboards and ads flood our eye view
trying to suck money from me and from you
your nobody without a ipod or your cell
walking in tecno heaven tottering in hell
looking like a maniac screaming at the air
yelling at your wife do you think we care
prada on your feet gucci on your back
wanting the the world to follow your back
designer labels and cars your in debt to the hilt
this is how you want your world to be built
god of money wealth and fame
you are winning we are tame
blind us with bling cover our eyes
destroy the earth blacken the sky
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2006-02-02 13:59:56]
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Re: suck money from me
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by ButchHoward on
Thursday, 2nd February 2006 @ 05:08:49 PM AEST
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Good write! This reminds me of a song I heard:
"Welcome, welcome to the USA.
We're partying fools in the Autumn of our hey day.
Welcome to the world of flame and fizz.
Where you will learn that packging is all there ever is."
BH |
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Re: suck money from me
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by deadheadpoet on
Thursday, 2nd February 2006 @ 11:54:48 PM AEST
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| Good write. The second stanza hit me good, the whole billboards thing. I hate seeing those littering up the view. Peace, Laura |
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Re: suck money from me
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 17th March 2007 @ 01:10:45 AM AEST
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| This is a very good poem about greed. The world can live wiithout all these material things. Great Job! |
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