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Eyes Blind Open
Contributed by
Nazmythian
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Thursday, 2nd February 2006 @ 12:03:30 AM in AEST
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Eyes blind open
Seeking not the truth
Focus on the concrete
Tangible, their proof
Closed minds falter
Facing the unknown
Explain away their faith
Science will condone
Fact is fiction
Fortunate are they
Sheltered from the demons
Sealing up their fate
Lies in darkness
Waiting for their time
Seeking out misguided
Fascinating rhyme
Bound by reason
What ever the cost
Eyes blind open, as they
Realize what’s lost
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Nazmythian
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Re: Eyes Blind Open
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by emystar on
Thursday, 2nd February 2006 @ 12:18:35 AM AEST
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U gots mucho power in that pen.
It's a wonder it don't burn your hand 'cause it definenly do burn 'cause I smell the smoke!
huggs,
emy
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Re: Eyes Blind Open
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Thursday, 2nd February 2006 @ 12:34:05 AM AEST
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Naz what can I say. Every time I have come to read ur work I'm always left captivated and in awe. An incredibly talented writer who can always pen remarkable outstanding masterpieces. May your pen always flow with brilliant poetic verses for us to read and enjoy. Well done.
*warm hugs*
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Re: Eyes Blind Open
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by Rumplestilskin on
Thursday, 2nd February 2006 @ 01:51:57 AM AEST
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| Definitly Philogious. I admire the construction and flow to your poem. Poems are creations which evoke meaning beyond mere marks on paper. The unsaid, says a lot to conjure up implied imagery. I loved your poem, good job. |
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Re: Eyes Blind Open
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by Vampirequeen on
Thursday, 2nd February 2006 @ 02:38:44 AM AEST
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| I agree with what Em said.wow power |
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Re: Eyes Blind Open
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by deadheadpoet on
Thursday, 2nd February 2006 @ 03:13:34 AM AEST
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| Wonderful. Loved how you conveyed your message. Thank you for sharing. I always enjoy the depth of your writes. Peace, Laura |
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Re: Eyes Blind Open
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by enigma on
Thursday, 2nd February 2006 @ 08:11:38 AM AEST
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...the structure and rhyme is very effective...skillfully done...you have admirable command of the language...I'm a bit green!!!
...I have found through fifty-four years of travail that the two institutions which control mankind's thinking and are the least open to self-criticism and the most closed-minded are science and religion...religion being the earthly structure created in an attempt at containing the uncontainable...a sense of my autonomous "Mother-Father" given spirituality and the gift of Love has kept me in the game...many of my poems express a deep confidence in Truth, Wisdom, Beauty and Love...Truth is what science and religion stumble over most often...one of my recent posts, "This, And This Alone..." expresses some of this...
...a very well written and thought provoking poem...I thank you for both...
ron...enigma |
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Re: Eyes Blind Open
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 2nd February 2006 @ 07:00:02 PM AEST
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And this is why you are one of my favorite living poets period! I have never read anything by you that disappoints. You are extremely talented and seem to commentate on every single issue in the known universe. Here you ask questions that point out the obvious answers, and that is simply genius. I am going to make a day to catch up on some of your work I have missed. Excellent job as always.
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Re: Eyes Blind Open
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by Willofree on
Friday, 3rd February 2006 @ 12:02:10 PM AEST
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Naz,
Ah a lot to look for here....:), sorry, I couldn't resist. I really do like the title to this poem. Yes, how often do we look, but do not see. It seems in our cognitive process our brain tells us what to look for, and so we report back when we have found what we were supposed to....unless we can keep an open mind.
Excellant poem, Nazzy/Scott, it makes one think ....
Will/Terry |
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Re: Eyes Blind Open
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by bobotheclown on
Sunday, 5th February 2006 @ 07:11:37 PM AEST
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Excellent write my friend I am a Christian, but
I also despise close minded people. A very
powerful write indeed thanks for sharing.
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Re: Eyes Blind Open
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by inoc on
Saturday, 25th March 2006 @ 04:41:49 PM AEST
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I like your work...
I am a christian but love checking things out and scanning the horizon....
as God is everywhere....even in the unknown!
You are a splendid poet.
coni |
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Re: Eyes Blind Open
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by lovingcritters on
Thursday, 6th April 2006 @ 09:51:37 PM AEST
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BRAVO~! How I enjoyed this one Naz.........Relgion today is DEAD. No one asks, now searches, they just take man's word for it!!!
Hypocrites are numerous, and Our Loving Creator in Heaven is watching, and yet He still some (very few) that represent Him as the Truth!
Great write as always Naz
I'm coming back to read the Your story, I enjoyed the last very much
Warm love
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