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The Touch of Him
Contributed by
Leslie
on
Wednesday, 1st February 2006 @ 11:42:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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His leg brushed against me
On that fateful day
And I knew
My life would change
In every conceivable way
My heart began to beat
At such a rapid pace
I turned by body away
So he could not see my face
Now each morning I awaken
And feel
The soft touch of him
And hear
The rhythm of his heart
And know
That in this life
We will never part
Copyright ©
Leslie
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2006-02-01 23:42:48]
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Re: The Touch of Him
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 2nd February 2006 @ 03:23:20 AM AEST
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| A lovely write. It made me smile. |
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Re: The Touch of Him
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by Man_On_High on
Tuesday, 7th February 2006 @ 12:26:30 AM AEST
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I love it.
first 2 stanzas..much passion-
Beautiful honesty at the close as well..
Go get him...
Sincerely..
Billy |
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Re: The Touch of Him
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by Elizabeth_Dandy on
Sunday, 30th July 2006 @ 10:18:41 AM AEST
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Very beautifully expressed romantic love.
What we really love, can never be lost.
On the contrary, love may even grow when it is physically lost.
Indestructible is its power!
Thanks for sharing. |
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