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A moment in my life
Contributed by
europeanprincess
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Wednesday, 1st February 2006 @ 10:30:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I might think of death as an everlasting love;
a perfect way to torture my soul.
There’s a whisper in my ear to wait for this longing;
a song of sorrow no meaning no mourning.
I try to hush it out with crying and yelling;
my mind is made up, but my heart is yearning.
Challenging is life and the decisions I make;
although there is happiness, sadness wins this fate.
You may think this is stupid for I am crazy to die, but sometimes I feel this is the only way I want to say goodbye.
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2006-02-01 22:30:39]
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Re: A moment in my life
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 1st February 2006 @ 10:36:18 PM AEST
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| I like this..You express so much emotion in it. Excellent work..Keep it up! |
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Re: A moment in my life
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by LoveStruck_Hippie on
Wednesday, 1st February 2006 @ 10:40:45 PM AEST
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Very emotional write.
I could feel the pain and sorrow spill to the page.
~Shannon |
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Re: A moment in my life
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Thursday, 2nd February 2006 @ 12:43:38 AM AEST
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A sad, emotive and well detailed write. One can feel ur pain and suffering. Writing is a good form of venting. May u see much brighter days ahead.
*warm heartfelt hugs*
~sue~ |
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Re: A moment in my life
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Thursday, 2nd February 2006 @ 08:42:53 AM AEST
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All I can say is that I'm glad you chose to write about it rather than actually do anything about it.
When you think about it you are a poet now rather than a stastitic !!
Steve |
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