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These Tears
Contributed by
jessica_schneider32
on
Wednesday, 1st February 2006 @ 05:45:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Tears,they fill my eyes
From his hurtful lies
I feel nothing but pain
He's making me go insane
I feel no happiness
I can not take this
No longer can i feel this way
So here I am
I need you
Here in my arms
I want you
I need you
To be here
I am dying without you
I can't stand this
I want back my happiness
All those times
You said you loved me
They were all just lies
I can't believe you
I had put all my trust in you.
But now I know
It was a mistake
Now all I have is heartache
But I can take it all back now!
Copyright ©
jessica_schneider32
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2006-02-01 17:45:45]
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Re: These Tears
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Wednesday, 1st February 2006 @ 06:02:39 PM AEST
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Nice opening work, keep it going :0)
Hope you enjoy your time here
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Re: These Tears
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by rationality on
Wednesday, 1st February 2006 @ 09:36:24 PM AEST
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i love it but it ended too soon :[
left me wanting more |
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Re: These Tears
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by from_first_to_last on
Thursday, 2nd February 2006 @ 03:58:44 PM AEST
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i luved it al lot but the end sorta confussed me but it is still a awsome poem.
luv skittles |
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