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without my skin
Contributed by
in_a_While
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Wednesday, 1st February 2006 @ 04:40:06 PM in AEST
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I've disregarded numbness
as i am without my skin
It's just because i love this
the morphine deep within
Settle down! my crawling thoughts!
i know you want some air
but you must know, it never stops
'cause hate is what we wear
blue paint's spilling into me
i feel my mood descend
another pill to set me free
so i can't sense the end
bitter bitter, another litter
of pills to push me 'round
letter letter, i know no better
until i feel the ground
...doesn't it feel like home???
dw
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Re: without my skin
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by moses on
Wednesday, 1st February 2006 @ 05:09:10 PM AEST
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| I like it a lot, consistant through out the poem. I've had my own experiences with pills so I can deffinitly relate to this. |
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Re: without my skin
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Thursday, 2nd February 2006 @ 12:18:17 AM AEST
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Pain and suffering expel from ur write my dear friend. Drugs and alcohol are no solution to any problems that u r facing in ur life. I must say u have the amazing ability of being able to express ur inner thoughts and emotions so well. A gifted artist who is also so incredibly gifted in writing. May brighter days make their way into ur troubled life my friend. I'm always here for u.
A very well executed and detailed write. Well done Dwayne.
*warm hugs n love*
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