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The Knife,Razor,And Blade
Contributed by
from_first_to_last
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Wednesday, 1st February 2006 @ 04:12:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I hate my life
Cause no one cares how i feel
Cause yall abuse me
Use me
Tease me
And screw with me
But yall always use me for a joke
Cause of wut yall see
On the outside of me
Yall make me think of suicide everyday
With a knife, razor or even a blade
With the blade i slit my throat
So that i will begin to choke
With the razor i slit my wrists
So that my feelins can seep thorugh it
With the knife i stab it through my chest
And i think this way is the best.
This goes out to all othe people that make me feel this way
* yall i hope u die sumday
Cause of the guilt and sorrow u have
For makin me kill myself
But yall messed with the wrong person
The person with many friends
So if u mess with me u mess with them
And they will make u pay
One way or another
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Re: The Knife,Razor,And Blade
(User Rating: 1 )
by Leslie on
Wednesday, 1st February 2006 @ 11:34:48 PM AEST
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| You know I don't exactly know how I feel about your poem. At first a feeling of sorrow then your ending put me off. As the mother of a daughter who nearly died by her own hand because of the cruelty of others I can tell you that all your anger and pain will only beget greater anguish for those left behind. If you truly feel this way, get help now!!!! The pain for those who have to survive the loss of a loved one is unbearable. |
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Re: The Knife,Razor,And Blade
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by darkstarsk8er1989 on
Thursday, 2nd February 2006 @ 09:57:03 AM AEST
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suicide is nothing to seek out. If you kill yourself then all you are doing is letting them know that they got the best of you. I know how you feel, I felt that way before. But believe me, If you do that you will hurt the family and friends that you leave behind more than those people could have ever hurt you. And I agree you should seek some help for these thoughts. But I do like the emotion you put into your writting.
~Dark~ |
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