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A Very Promising Title (the story of stitches)
Contributed by
isaiyan
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Wednesday, 1st February 2006 @ 03:36:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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no, I didn't see you
that was the day I told you to meet me.
I shouldn't have cut it.
now I mope with the stitches.
give and take a couple of inches
and a few promises you're good at breaking
taking....it all in with one fellow swoop
and replacing it with nothing.
so, I didn't see you
and instead you annoy me
with your constant breathing
and your stories of stitches.
what you signed up for
couldn't be as bad
even though I mark your absence
with the pain of smudged time.
yet, I did see you
propped up on the back of seder
with a withered siddur in one hand
revealing a very promising title.
it was you and the story of stitches
which explained your absence and dander
and your sordid contemplation
only accepted with a shrug
Copyright ©
isaiyan
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2006-02-01 15:36:06]
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Re: A Very Promising Title (the story of stitches)
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 1st February 2006 @ 03:40:55 PM AEST
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| Intense. The emotions were strong. I loved it! |
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Re: A Very Promising Title (the story of stitches)
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by ivoryA on
Monday, 9th April 2007 @ 08:40:07 AM AEST
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| wow that was really good...i enjoyed reading it... you are very good with words |
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