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she tore me all apart

Contributed by grip-wth-broken-fingers on Wednesday, 1st February 2006 @ 03:04:40 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

The day i left the angels clipped my wings
those tears that fell tore me all apart
I never realised it was killing me
just looking inside of you
just walking away
now i can ***** feel it its killing me over again
i,m so ***** sincerely sorry i broke your heart.

I should have stopped it from happening from the beggining
I felt something so strong but never thought not once
that it would end like this
I never felt th way a heart should
But i never realised that it would all
fal;l to pieces so quickly around me
If only i,d of tried whats bleeding a few more times ?
but now i,m bleeding from my heart
without her here to hold.

W e were such a beautiful mess
and i would do it all over again
i would fall to pieces one last time
to feel her next to me
how am i supposed to feel about the things i,ve done
i know i,ve hurt you and i,ll never feel the same
the only heart i ever wanted to beath with mine
i,m sorry i threw it all away.

I,m so sincerley sorry for breaking your heart
i would bleed for a life time
for your smell, your touch, for you right here next to me.

Copyright © grip-wth-broken-fingers ... [ 2006-02-01 15:04:40]
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Re: she tore me all apart (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 14th March 2007 @ 06:05:21 PM AEST
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I can feel the remorse in this poem. This was very well written!

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