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Leaving my mind
Contributed by
MaxHam
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Wednesday, 1st February 2006 @ 02:09:05 PM in AEST
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What could it be that is deep inside my heart? Is it love I feel or is it another trick that my mind plays on me? She is everything I could ask for in a girl and more! She may not be perfect but nobody is. What am I writing this for? If love is truly in this situation then my heart is broken before I can ask this firl that I speak of is only a friend if it were more than friends it would only be in my dream world I hate to admit, please why can't it be over? Why can't I keep it? Dreams come and crushes do too, if we got together my world would go from one to two.
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Re: Leaving my mind
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by lostrelic on
Wednesday, 1st February 2006 @ 02:38:49 PM AEST
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| love is a bi%#h nice write |
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Re: Leaving my mind
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 14th March 2007 @ 07:32:55 PM AEST
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| Love can be a beautiful thing but it can be hideous. it can bring two people together or tear a harmonious relationship into thousands of peices(I experienced the latter!) I enjoyed the two sides you showed in this poem. Excellent jon! |
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