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like an autumn leaf
Contributed by
Lady_Daisy
on
Wednesday, 1st February 2006 @ 03:57:20 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Golden brown and beautiful
So fragile, the autumn leaf
as it crushes in my hands
a sense of relief.
Reminding me, of my fragility
and the ache of the last fall
crushing me into ashes,
Like an autumn leaf.
Copyright ©
Lady_Daisy
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2006-02-01 03:57:20]
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Re: like an autumn leaf
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by Vampirequeen on
Wednesday, 1st February 2006 @ 05:01:19 AM AEST
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short and to the point .
nice |
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Re: like an autumn leaf
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by Jackee_line on
Wednesday, 1st February 2006 @ 05:57:25 AM AEST
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| very nice, good job |
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Re: like an autumn leaf
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by OzChick on
Wednesday, 1st February 2006 @ 06:26:25 AM AEST
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I enjoyed this short, wistful poem. Nice write.
~Jenny~ |
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Re: like an autumn leaf
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 1st February 2006 @ 10:44:28 AM AEST
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| Yes, life is fragile, wonderful write to rmind us all of that...mike |
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Re: like an autumn leaf
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Wednesday, 1st February 2006 @ 02:08:57 PM AEST
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Short and sweet, gives them message then walks away.
I like what you did here
Steve |
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Re: like an autumn leaf
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by Whisper on
Sunday, 5th February 2006 @ 02:01:56 AM AEST
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Nice write. Feelings expressed without using too many words. Good write.
Whisper |
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Re: like an autumn leaf
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by DrogedaRain on
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| So much imagery, with so little words. Beautiful.. |
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