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Baby Girl
Contributed by
Leslie
on
Tuesday, 31st January 2006 @ 11:40:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Oh my baby girl
Had you succeeded
I would feel
Nothing
But anger, grief
For the loss of life
That was much too
Brief
Baby Girl
The world would have
Never known
Your kindness, gentle touch
Oh my baby girl
The world would have
Lost
Too much
Copyright ©
Leslie
... [
2006-01-31 23:40:38]
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Re: Baby Girl
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 1st February 2006 @ 02:54:08 AM AEST
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| Short and to the point with a lot of emotion. Sad write. I liked it though. Nice work. |
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Re: Baby Girl
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by EmSal on
Wednesday, 1st February 2006 @ 03:58:59 AM AEST
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| That one got me good. Excellent, powerful and extremely saddening. |
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Re: Baby Girl
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by Man_On_High on
Friday, 3rd February 2006 @ 11:52:48 PM AEST
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Please accept my deepest regrets leslie..
assuming this were written in a literal sense-
My thoughts and pryer to you Luv..
Peace to you..
Most humbly..
Billy |
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Re: Baby Girl
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 20th February 2006 @ 01:52:43 PM AEST
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Really touching...very emotional write.....
Well done..
Jenni |
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