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When?
Contributed by
OzChick
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Tuesday, 31st January 2006 @ 10:59:44 PM in AEST
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~~~
When will people wake up,
And see the truth that surrounds?
When are we gonna open our eyes,
And see that chaos abounds.
Deaf to the cries that reach our ears,
We turn a blind eye.
Dumbly moving though the years,
Forever asking, why?
When will people stand up,
Refusing to give ground?
When are we gonna expose the lies?
Deceit is all around.
Clinging desperately to our fears,
We don't even try.
Blinded we are by our own tears,
Simply waiting to die.
When will people grow up,
Get off the 'merry-go -round'?
When are we gonna answer the cries,
And live what we expound?
Still it seems that no one hears.
Truth, they will deny.
Though it echoes through the years,
The truth will never die.
~~~
Copyright ©
OzChick
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2006-01-31 22:59:44]
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Re: When?
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Wednesday, 1st February 2006 @ 02:13:58 AM AEST
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| Truth always the winner in the end. Nice read. |
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Re: When?
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Wednesday, 1st February 2006 @ 03:00:20 AM AEST
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| Wow...wonderful write! I loved the message and the flow. Great work! |
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Re: When?
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Wednesday, 1st February 2006 @ 10:48:28 AM AEST
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| Powerful write. Thanks for sharing...Mike |
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Re: When?
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 1st February 2006 @ 07:15:40 PM AEST
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strong write. truth is the way way to freedom.
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Michelle |
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Re: When?
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by deadheadpoet on
Thursday, 2nd February 2006 @ 03:27:45 AM AEST
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| Jenny, Great write. I wonder these things myself. Peace to you my friend, Laura |
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