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Smiles and Razors Can Only Go So Deep...
Contributed by
SmileSkinDeep
on
Tuesday, 31st January 2006 @ 10:11:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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Laughing on the outside
Yet, dieing within
Crying on the inside
Just beneath my skin
Where the razor
Used to tear,
Through my veins
Expessing despair
One too deep...
My mistake
Promisses I said to keep
The pain to sedate
Only wished to be left;
Only hoped to be solved,
If I hadn't wept
You wouldn't be involved
I would've died in silence,
All alone
If the moon wan't so luminous:
The blood and tears wouldn't show
You should have walked on,
Pain no heed
Like everyone else,
Just left me to bleed
Shouldn't have made me
Tell you
I shouldn't have
Let you through
All those things wouldn't happen
If it weren't for you...
Copyright ©
SmileSkinDeep
... [
2006-01-31 22:11:04]
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Re: Smiles and Razors Can Only Go So Deep...
(User Rating: 1 )
by temper on
Wednesday, 1st February 2006 @ 01:23:52 PM AEST
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nice poem i fell like that some times
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Re: Smiles and Razors Can Only Go So Deep...
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 1st February 2006 @ 03:55:05 PM AEST
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| Good stuff! I loved the title! |
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Re: Smiles and Razors Can Only Go So Deep...
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by Faust on
Monday, 13th February 2006 @ 08:38:20 PM AEST
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| This really is a great poem you should be proud of it. |
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