|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
I am the mountain (you are the rain)
Contributed by
iodinelove
on
Tuesday, 31st January 2006 @ 08:20:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
|
Holding her loosely beneath the satin rivers of the night, he said,
"Silver is the water of my love, and my love is a stolen white sky surrendering to the beginning of a new dawn."
She smiled at this, fingering the curls of autumn's final locks, and said quietly,
"In my dreams I am a mountain approaching a new dawn; there are thunders all around me, and I am afraid, but then the rain comes and its waters are a silver day laughing all around me, and I dance."
With this said, he closed his eyes and looked for her, saying,
"In my dreams you are the rain and I am the mountain. I am tired, thirsty, stretched thin by the sun. You come to me-slowly at first, as if afraid; then faster, faster, shattering against my flesh-and I drink."
And laughing, they kissed and slept and dreamed, and in their dreams they said,
"Together we are mountain, rain, and sky; the silver thunders of a fast approaching dawn, and together, we dance."
Copyright ©
iodinelove
... [
2006-01-31 20:20:12]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: I am the mountain (you are the rain)
(User Rating: 1 )
by trev_clev on
Tuesday, 31st January 2006 @ 09:42:06 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| I like it! written well |
|
|
Re: I am the mountain (you are the rain)
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 31st January 2006 @ 09:49:04 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Wow, the imagery was breathe taking in this write, I love the last two verses, very romantic.
LG |
|
|
Re: I am the mountain (you are the rain)
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 31st January 2006 @ 10:27:59 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| Awesome!! It was a pleasure reading and very sweet....Mike |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
