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On the brink of sadness
Contributed by
the_story_of_the_year
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Tuesday, 31st January 2006 @ 06:22:30 PM in AEST
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selfstruggles
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That feeling is stuck in my stomach again
I move slow
I think slow
And nobody knows what I'm talking about
And at times neither do I
I feel heavy, dark, on the brink of sadness
I've failed in life
And I'm only a quarter of the way through it
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Re: On the brink of sadness
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by xXx_Fem_Fatale_xXx on
Tuesday, 31st January 2006 @ 07:55:12 PM AEST
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To who's standards did you failed life?....Isnt life what you make of it?....Dont care what others think n feel what you should do with YER life...Yer life is yer own, no one elses.
You young, still so much ahead for yas.....
Live life to the max.
Huggss,
Nats. |
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Re: On the brink of sadness
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by EmSal on
Wednesday, 1st February 2006 @ 04:02:15 AM AEST
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| Don't go any further than the brink of sadness if at all possible...! Good short write. |
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Re: On the brink of sadness
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Saturday, 10th March 2007 @ 08:52:16 AM AEST
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| The way this was written (the wording, the narration) was mediocre, but the way you delivered the peace really struck me. The genius was in the last line, which was my favorite. |
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