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Triumph
Contributed by
poetryfreak13
on
Tuesday, 31st January 2006 @ 06:01:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Here I lie on my deathbed,
They come again
These feelings of dread.
As I lie here,
I die inside,
And no one notices.
I die and no one
Cares.
With my last
Breath, I scream
But no one comes
To comfort me.
And here I died alone.
No one misses me.
And again the mask,
That hides the real me,
The outer shell,
Triumphs.
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poetryfreak13
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2006-01-31 18:01:08]
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Re: Triumph
(User Rating: 1 )
by Zanobia on
Tuesday, 31st January 2006 @ 06:15:03 PM AEST
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| wow, that is alot like my poems, they are saying the same thing. it is really good. keep up the great writing. |
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Re: Triumph
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by SmileSkinDeep on
Tuesday, 31st January 2006 @ 10:24:15 PM AEST
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good write...can connect, i like how you're straight to the point
~April |
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