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God..let me leave
Contributed by
poetic_influence
on
Tuesday, 31st January 2006 @ 12:09:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
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It was my decision
And I fell in love with a head on collision
The lies of love had permenently blurred my vision
I look up at every star on which I was wishing
Thinking why did you make my wishes come true
God you knew back then that I didn't have a clue
The lust of him was all that I knew
You knew it would never end up to be just us two
So I cry with tears that could have sunk the Arc
A deep screaming pain that lies straight through my heart
Please take away this broken peice of art
I never want to hurt again much less.. embark!
All these years I have wasted for him
That once bright light is now getting so very dim
God, you know whatever he needed I went out on a limb
Even when I knew that the outlook of love was grim
Take away my free will because all I do is screw it up
I try and I try but in his lies I am stuck
You say that my love will raise me above the ruck
Well than give me a sign that soon I will lift up
Because until then I quit
I saved all my love for him and this is what I get
I set him on a pedistol and he throws me in a pit
Are these all of the signs that our love is legit?
.....No I dont think so
This is no present wrapped witha pretty red bow
This is a burden topped with a black squawking crow
And for all of these reasons I feel that I must go
So you guide him if you must
I cannot do it for it is him that I cannot trust
Now it is my turn to leave someone in the dust
I look at him with utter contempt and disgust
I'll let you know he is some peice of work
You teach him a lesson and he will hear not one word
But that is ok because I am a free bird
Now the sounds of the wind is all that will be heard
So thank you God for giving me strength
Thank you for letting me go that extra length
Now I will no longer live with torment
For once..My soul is content
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Re: God..let me leave
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 31st January 2006 @ 12:36:21 PM AEST
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This absolutely consumed me as I read it, Beautiful, liberating, and so from the heart !!!!!
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Re: God..let me leave
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by Spazzo on
Tuesday, 31st January 2006 @ 01:46:06 PM AEST
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This is a great poem.
Take care.
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Re: God..let me leave
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 31st January 2006 @ 02:15:06 PM AEST
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powerfully emotional and structured.
Nice work
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