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mbt
Contributed by
exodus
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Tuesday, 31st January 2006 @ 12:36:53 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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beauty established
like a base that confronted the lines of me
incredibility that consumed us
turning over and over just trying to just be
blown away into nothing
the conspiracy of what I like to call me
sitting on top of the world tonight
rolling around together waiting for sensing see
our eyes mold into pale blue
with amber crusts embedding themselves into truth
we come into our own answers
explaining that our being is everything as I come into you
it was considered a disaster
with all the skeptics sitting so inconspicuously
I sat alone in doubt and torment
but awoke in self indulgence and so happily
smiled from my ankles
all the way to the top of my brain
I sat in the most wonderful of company
and tried not to complain
that it was not just you and me
and wonder broke into my mind
I saw the first glimpse of happiness
And wondered of you as mine
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exodus
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2006-01-31 00:36:53]
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Re: mbt
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 31st January 2006 @ 02:35:31 AM AEST
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u have magic fingers that dance accross the screen with many magic words.
huggs, big smiles,
emy |
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Re: mbt
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by reecy on
Tuesday, 31st January 2006 @ 09:14:49 AM AEST
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| Very beutiful nice choice of words. Not too clear on the meaning? but truely nice write |
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Re: mbt
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 31st January 2006 @ 12:24:25 PM AEST
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Imaginative and colorful, this poem is so unique, I LOVE IT!!!!!!! ( i dont know why but it reminds me of a Dave Mathews song )
Great write,
LG |
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