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Direct the Blame
Contributed by
peaceinfear
on
Monday, 30th January 2006 @ 11:34:11 PM in AEST
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Im sorry about all the lies, I never meant to be so cold
Im sorry about all the pain, i never meant to be so rough
Im sorry about all the hate, i never meant to be so weak
Im sorry about all the greed, i never meant to be so mean
Im sorry about all the fear, i never meant to be so absent
Im sorry about all the death, i never meant to be so careless
Im sorry about all the tears, i never meant to be so blind
Im sorry about all the decay, i never meant to be so neglecting
Im sorry about all the hurt, i never meant to be so harmful
Im sorry about all the crime, i never meant to be so shamed
Im sorry about all the trying, i never meant to be so obstinate
Im sorry about all the depression, i never meant to be spiteful
Im sorry about all the bad in the world i never meant to be born
But wait i cant change who i am, so im sorry you are not strong, im sorry your not okay, im sorry your not willfull, im sorry your not nurturing, im sorry your not helpful, im sorry your not proud, im sorry your not all-seeing, im sorry your not
im sorry its true you are only human, im sorry you put the blame on others, im sorry you hate and not love
im sorry you cant realize its your hurt, your pain, your sorrow, your shame.
im sorry for all those who cant see the pain you feel is not from me its not my problem i dont choose your stubborness i cant lose if you feel im you malice it may be true but im only your hate when you stare in the mirror your eyes can see right through
so as i said ill say again, im sorry you cant realize its your hurt, your pain, your sorrow, your shame,
Not mine.
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2006-01-30 23:34:11]
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Re: Direct the Blame
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 31st January 2006 @ 02:44:59 AM AEST
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Well keep scribblin down 'cause this is mucho wisdom in these words.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Direct the Blame
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by OzChick on
Tuesday, 31st January 2006 @ 08:03:19 AM AEST
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| Emystar is right, there is wisdom here. I think this is a great first draft and with a little reworking it could be brilliant. Keep at it. |
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Re: Direct the Blame
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by Poetic_Influence on
Tuesday, 31st January 2006 @ 10:30:28 AM AEST
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| nice work, keep writing |
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