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giggle stroll
Contributed by
lostrelic
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Monday, 30th January 2006 @ 09:03:21 PM in AEST
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a flash a bang my demons they sang
from across thy eclipse moon
raving today in a sorry way
banging fists against my tomb
my clock on three hands running lost time
a tick and tock display
since time has no meaning as my world gets a beating
i giggle all the way
insanity my eyes they sparkle all the time
joy i feel in my soul
to make people happy and to stroll all the way that is a fit goal
howl and scream i awake from your dream
even though your not there
connected we were from the start of your stir
i can feel your scare
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2006-01-30 21:03:21]
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Re: giggle stroll
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 31st January 2006 @ 02:30:57 PM AEST
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A most excellant poem well crafted rm.
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Re: giggle stroll
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by Templar on
Tuesday, 31st January 2006 @ 03:47:09 PM AEST
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| A decidedly well worded poem, excellent, abosultely excellent, word choice that flows nicely. I've read it a few times and am not quite sure of the point, but, maybe it is just about being warped but fun, like you said. |
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