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My Empty Heart
Contributed by
Gigi_15
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Monday, 30th January 2006 @ 05:05:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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A broken heart can be mend
But an empty heart is just empty
The broken heart was once loved
Though the empty heart can’t recall love’s existence
For that is how some of us feel
Though it was never made clear
Who would have the broken heart and whom the empty heart
But sadly today I can say
I’ve got the empty one
For I was never loved that way
I gave him all I had
While he gave her all he had
My love was gone to waste
For what I thought was love
Was just a fantasy I was living in
Nevertheless
Some people would think this is just pathetic
The way I’m feeling
But that’s how one feels when they’re empty
The feeling is unbearable
Copyright ©
Gigi_15
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2006-01-30 17:05:04]
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Re: My Empty Heart
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 30th January 2006 @ 05:51:24 PM AEST
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In a word? " Masterpeice " but this deserves nore than a mere embelishment, it's pure
unadulterated emotional perfection, it realy gets through 2 the heart. lovely peice of writting u have here.
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Re: My Empty Heart
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Monday, 30th January 2006 @ 07:10:07 PM AEST
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A powerful and thought provoking piece.
You say you have the empty heart, yet your work conveys a heart that is deep and warm.
Perhaps it is more of an unlucky heart ?
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