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Too Long
Contributed by
Weeno
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Monday, 30th January 2006 @ 03:01:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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For too long I’ve hidden under a layer of smiles,
With happy words rising from my mouth,
But true thoughts never leaving my lips.
They say the truth shall set you free,
But inside my cell I know I’m safe.
For too long you’ve heard naught but lies,
If you knew the truth you’d realise,
You don’t actually know who I am,
It’s true you know me as well as yourself,
But ‘me’ is only a mask, I unknowingly created.
Copyright ©
Weeno
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2006-01-30 15:01:16]
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Re: Too Long
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 11th March 2007 @ 05:14:21 PM AEST
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I, too have been burden with the many masks, the many parts I have played to hide my true being. I know how you feel and hopefully the masks will crack and crumble as they did for me and your beautiful true being will emerge!
This is a magnificent poem!
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Re: Too Long
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by GAMEchief on
Tuesday, 13th March 2007 @ 10:03:20 PM AEST
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| Easy to relate to. You should write a poem about who you really are behind the mask. |
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