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Where Am I Wrong
Contributed by
AmberMore
on
Monday, 30th January 2006 @ 12:09:53 PM in AEST
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dedicatedpoems
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When first time i see you, i feel you are the one
But i dont know why, i feel, i am not eligible for you,
But all that fealings you gave me that make me feel that you are in interest too,
The time passes as it always, and i courageously propose you about my love,
And you ignore as i am not that one,
I forget every thing but then also you always try to make me feel
that you are in interest,
But at the second time also you dided the same, i cant understand myself that
where am i wrong or just this all thing is fake as it always seems to others,
And what worst this is not story end you are doing the same, as you always.
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2006-01-30 12:09:53] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Where Am I Wrong
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Sunday, 11th March 2007 @ 05:18:14 PM AEST (User
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This swas a wonderful and sad poem. its too bad it didn't work out for you |
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