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NOVACAINE
Contributed by
Forgotten_soul
on
Monday, 30th January 2006 @ 07:58:26 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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As I close my eyes, it all slips away, the emotion, the fealings, the pain from today, Im masking my life, and everything
real, right now this lie, is all I can feal, Im numb from this joy, that does not exist, and I will not stop, I refuze to desist,
this veil on my world, is all I now want, enjoying my pain, its not going to stop.
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2006-01-30 07:58:26]
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Re: NOVACAINE
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by from_first_to_last on
Monday, 30th January 2006 @ 01:15:22 PM AEST
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wow its sooo kool that you care about your friend sooo much to write a poem and deticate it to them. i luv this poem too
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Re: NOVACAINE
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by Man_On_High on
Saturday, 11th February 2006 @ 01:13:49 AM AEST
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I liked this one too...just as much..."great hate"..
check it out though-
instead of saying:
" is all I now want,"
try this:
"is all that I want"...
just small minor little changes make the difference-
still great writing..
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