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CLOWNS.
Contributed by
butterflygirl40
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Sunday, 29th January 2006 @ 08:43:23 PM in AEST
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There was this clown named hully and he was brown and he had a breakdown .
Because of all the other clowns putdowns and letdowns.
The clown hully always frown because he didn't like the letdowns and the towns .
Hully hated to go downtown with all the other clowns he would frowned and knockdown all the other clowns in town.
Hully hated nouns and pronouns and the circus ,he hated gowns and the countdowns of the circus.
One day after sundown , Hully let the towns and he never ruturn again and hully was all rundowned from
The circus and the other clowns.
When the other clowns went looking for hully they found him with another nervous breakdown and after all of this the circus was never the same again without hully in it the CIRUS CLOSED DOWN!!!!
was never the same again
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Re: CLOWNS.
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by shutterfly2004 on
Sunday, 29th January 2006 @ 09:17:55 PM AEST
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| I really do like this poem... I dont see nothing wrong with it!! |
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Re: CLOWNS.
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 30th January 2006 @ 05:44:32 PM AEST
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wow this brought tears 2 my heart reading it, how original u r, i love your style and this was so innocent, yes, quite beautiful a peice of poetry if ever there was.
Ben
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Re: CLOWNS.
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 31st January 2006 @ 07:00:25 PM AEST
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| We are all clowns and never let another clown let you down. The circus must go on. A sad poem, a lot of meaning put into it, I see your writing heart made it through, relax, even when you think you won't be able to pull another poem out of your heart, just know something always will come. Hugs from your reader, raquelLeah. |
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