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Dust the Negative Away
Contributed by
NoSaint
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Sunday, 29th January 2006 @ 07:29:49 PM in AEST
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Little Star was shining bright
Giving off an incredible light
When space debris blew by
Misting up the beautiful night sky
Causing Little Star to cough and sneeze
Please go away she said so I can breathe
But this debris just hollered and screamed
Making such an unbelievable scene
Leaving Little Star quaking
In the grasp of its ugly wake
She could not shine bright now
She just put her head in a bow
Will someone help me fix my glow?
Repair it I just don’t know
The moon looked and felt bad
Please don’t be so very sad
Just brush yourself off and shine
Don’t let others dull you, you’ll do fine
This advice to you I give
Treat others as you would like to live
But don’t let them bring you down
Or make your face turn in a frown
Just dust off their bad vibes and smile
And you will be fine in a little while
Copyright ©
NoSaint
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2006-01-29 19:29:49]
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Re: Dust the Negative Away
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by shelby on
Sunday, 29th January 2006 @ 07:44:01 PM AEST
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Thanks so much for this Shari made me feel so much better and my glow is starting to come back already whatout you may have created a super nova!ROFLMOA
little star
Michelle |
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Re: Dust the Negative Away
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 29th January 2006 @ 08:58:31 PM AEST
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Awww Shari..what a terrific poem for Michelle... Beautifully done..
Jenni |
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Re: Dust the Negative Away
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by deadheadpoet on
Sunday, 29th January 2006 @ 10:57:24 PM AEST
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| Shari, this was so kind...so sweet. I will share this one with my daughter. Beautiful write. Peace, Laura |
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Re: Dust the Negative Away
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 31st January 2006 @ 07:51:41 PM AEST
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This is beautiful, yes, I have my feather duster at hand. Nice poem for a wonderful person, as you are as well. Thank you for this poem full of wisdom.
*****This advice to you I give
Treat others as you would like to live
Another way of speaking "The Golden Rule" .. thank you for adding that into your poem. hugs. raquelLeah
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