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Fileo
Contributed by
chulysnacky
on
Sunday, 29th January 2006 @ 02:28:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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WHEN I LOOK INTO YOUR EYES
I FEEL SO HYPNOTIZED
I WONDER SOMETIMES...
COULD THIS REALLY BE TRUE? OR,
IS THIS ALL A FANTASY TO YOU?
I REMEMBER THE DAY YOU LOOKED AT ME
I HONESTLY FELT LIKE WE WERE MEANT TO BE...
I KNOW THAT THIS IS SOMEWHAT HEAVY, BUT
I GET BUTTERFLIES IN MY BELLY AND
WHENEVER I AM NEXT TO YOU
ITS LIKE AN IMAGE OF A DREAM COME TRUE
BABY CAN'T YOU SEE OUR LOVE IS MEANT TO BE
I KNOW SOMEWHERE DEEP INSIDE THAT YOU AGREE.
MUCH LIKE THE SUN IN JUNE..SO BRIGHT
I SHALL FIND MY WAY TO YOU..TONIGHT
WHEN YOU ARE NOT AROUND
I FEEL SO SAD AND BLUE
THIS LOVE I SHARE IS SO PROFOUND
AND I ONLY SHARE IT WITH YOU
MY LOVE CAN'T YOU SEE THIS TENDER LOVE IS TRUE!
IF YOU FEEL MISLEAD AND CANNOT REST YOUR HEAD
JUST TURN TO ME AND YOU WILL SEE
THE POSSIBILITY OF EVERLASTING LOVE
BECAUSE WE ARE MADE FROM UP ABOVE
A FLOWER IN THE SAND
ITS ROOTS THEY JUST CAN'T STAND
TO SET ITSELF ITS TOUGH
THEY'RE LIVING IN THE ROUGH
WHENEVER I START TO CRY
INSIDE I WANT TO DIE
OUT OF MISERY IS WHAT SHE SAID TO ME
DAUGHTER DON'T YOU CRY
LETS SING A LULLABY
THE END IS REALLY NEAR
BUT DON'T YOU LIVE IN FEAR
TRUST THE LORD ABOVE
HE KNOWS WHAT WE ARE MADE OF
AND IF EVER YOU FEEL WEAK
FEARLESS YOU SHOULD BE TO SPEAK
A SINGLE PRAYER IS ALL YOU NEED
AND HE WILL MAKE YOUR LIFE COMPLETE
Copyright ©
chulysnacky
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2006-01-29 14:28:50]
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Re: Fileo
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by princess_of_pain on
Sunday, 29th January 2006 @ 02:59:12 PM AEST
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| touching poem... good job!! |
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Re: Fileo
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 29th January 2006 @ 03:13:25 PM AEST
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| Full of emotion. I really liked this, especially the end. Nice work! |
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Re: Fileo
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by OzChick on
Friday, 2nd June 2006 @ 10:13:21 AM AEST
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| This one reminded me of 'Begging Love'. To me it looked like it could have been a rewrite. This is excellent. Much better balance to the rhythm and rhyme. I like the emotional tone of this one and the more positive outlook in the end. |
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