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Moments of Magical Dreaming
Contributed by
brew
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Sunday, 29th January 2006 @ 02:03:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Beautiful Fields with the grass so green
Its blades move with each jostile sway
There you begin to lay a blanket down
You see someone appear
From afar the shawdow isnt clear
Then ahead through a distance of that one blink...
It may be someone who you have longed far...
Deamed of
Thought more and more of
To know you could be spending a precious moment in time with
To long for that time just lying and breathing..............No words
Moments of quite
Just a simple touch that makes one ............Breathless
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brew
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2006-01-29 14:03:44]
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Re: Moments of Magical Dreaming
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 29th January 2006 @ 02:35:58 PM AEST
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Really lovely, Brew..Great imagery...
Dreams DO come true......
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: Moments of Magical Dreaming
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by Poetic_Influence on
Sunday, 29th January 2006 @ 04:00:44 PM AEST
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| nice 1 to read |
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Re: Moments of Magical Dreaming
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 29th January 2006 @ 04:26:22 PM AEST
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I concur here, Brew. Amazing imagery. So sweet and beautiful.
mmmmm ... dreams are wonderful aren't they? This is one
I would never want to awaken from .
Lovely.
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Re: Moments of Magical Dreaming
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by NoSaint on
Sunday, 29th January 2006 @ 05:29:15 PM AEST
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beautiful imagery
Shari |
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Re: Moments of Magical Dreaming
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 30th January 2006 @ 04:51:47 PM AEST
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wow brew this is absolutley beautiful. so dreamy light and airy, i dare say even trancends love, a natural master peice my friend.
((((brew)))))
Ben |
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Re: Moments of Magical Dreaming
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by halli on
Wednesday, 19th April 2006 @ 02:48:14 PM AEST
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i LOVE it brew.its sooo sweet and the imagery is great. its something that u can actually believe and something that u could actually dream. I like the fact that it kinda reflects the inner u too. keep it up. i love poems that are sappy lol.
love and hugs
~halli |
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