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childs mind.
Contributed by
plous
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Monday, 27th January 2003 @ 10:20:00 AM in AEST
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no shape,
no pattern,
nothing to rely on,
no geometry,
just mass,
base logic on shadows,
an anchor in space,
where are the dimensions,
lost and crying aloud,
a child in the dark,
floor constantly changeing,
a roof never there,
spots and sound,
light on no walls,
no time to see,
just flows about in no order known to me,
reach your hand out in front of your face,
and touch the space,
now how to live with no memory.
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plous
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2003-01-27 10:20:00]
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Re: childs mind.
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by LOWMAN613 on
Monday, 27th January 2003 @ 06:21:29 PM AEST
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| plous, really a good write here,You did a wel done job on this peice! Christina |
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Re: childs mind.
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by venkat on
Tuesday, 28th January 2003 @ 12:51:32 AM AEST
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| It is interesting, A good write..venkat |
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