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sun earth moon you
Contributed by
cliff
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Sunday, 29th January 2006 @ 07:42:52 AM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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The laws of probability suggest that with the impending change of season, you will be gone.
like the sun, you serve oh so many, but are appreciated by only a few.
Although your core is rapidly shrinking, the purpose you serve is constantly expanding.
There are a select few who worship you, as if in the midst of your fury there are answers to be learnt and secrets to be kept.
Despite the chaos that explodes around you, your existence provides a steady force of gravity for those who need it most.
And like the earth, when the moon arises and the dark of night sets in, the only piece i have of you is a reflection 300,000 miles from me and i miss you.
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cliff
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2006-01-29 07:42:52]
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Re: sun earth moon you
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by TheSpiritx on
Sunday, 29th January 2006 @ 10:16:56 AM AEST
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Interesting first poem, cliff.
It definitely fits the abstract category and style has been thrown out.
I liked the concepts you convey here, too - the shared dependence on someone who is out of reach.
Thanks for sharing, cliff, and I am interested to read more of your work.
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Re: sun earth moon you
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by deadheadpoet on
Sunday, 29th January 2006 @ 12:56:28 PM AEST
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| Yes, very interesting write here. Enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing. Peace, Laura |
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Re: sun earth moon you
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by Butterflygirl40 on
Sunday, 29th January 2006 @ 08:25:13 PM AEST
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very nice poem i liked it.
Welcome to your poetry dot com^_^ |
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Re: sun earth moon you
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 3rd February 2006 @ 07:08:04 PM AEST
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| It's beautiful....definitely ambiguous,but beautiful.. |
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