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Inbetween Daylight
Contributed by
grode
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Sunday, 29th January 2006 @ 04:48:04 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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In the silence I find myself,
when the only voice is deep within,
and conversation finally has true meaning,
In the darkness I find the light,
when daylight dies the pressure fades,
and my mind is free to roam the earth,
Inbetween moments I find reality,
when the world slows my visison clears,
behind the motion the world is right,
In the past I see joy and pain,
the stolen photographs hang in my mind,
their unorganization is what makes me whole,
In my memories I find you,
Some Impacts are never mean't to live forever,
So as I cry the tears of yesterdays,
you wipe them away with the years we had,
because in my heart you never died,
Copyright ©
grode
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2006-01-29 04:48:04]
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Re: Inbetween Daylight
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 29th January 2006 @ 05:21:49 AM AEST
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| A beautiful write and a great tribute to your dad. My best friend died 2 months ago, so I understand all the emotion behind this. Nice work. |
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Re: Inbetween Daylight
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by emystar on
Sunday, 29th January 2006 @ 05:29:34 AM AEST
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Very beautifull, touching tribute.
Know what cha mean.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Inbetween Daylight
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by kiza on
Sunday, 29th January 2006 @ 09:28:14 AM AEST
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| very good poem: ) |
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Re: Inbetween Daylight
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by Dom on
Monday, 5th February 2007 @ 01:02:08 PM AEST
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A very touching, emotional poem with beautiful images, the last line especially. I send you my best wishes,
Dom |
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